05-02-2022, 01:38 PM
Sorry that I'm so late in responding to this. Yes, my suggestions technically make the adventure a bit more linear but without railroading the PCs. The revision streamlines and simplifies things so the adventure and the initial information are not so open-ended or vague that the players get lost or become unsure about their potential next steps and choices. It gives them clearer information to work with and eliminates some unnecessary steps if they decide to get involved and investigate further.