10-08-2019, 04:00 PM
Some reallly cool stuff.
Somebody needs to do a bit more proofing though - there are a lot of typos. Orcs is spelled Ores about 1 time out of 3.
I'm a little fuzzy on what exactly Dave Arneson wrote. On p6 it says "A Poem by Dave Arneson", but there is no poem. Instead we get "an abstract of a poem by Dave Arneson"
Does that mean:
A) Dave wrote a poem, and someone (presumably Havard) summarized the story of the poem in prose.
or
B) Dave wrote the whole abstract as it we see it on pages 6-9, and there never was a poem?
I guess B, but in any case it'd be nice to have a bit more info about what it is and about when it was written and how it is that it is used "with permission of the author". There's some pretty interesting things in there and the whole thing reminds me a bit of the write up on Izmer Dave did.
Somebody needs to do a bit more proofing though - there are a lot of typos. Orcs is spelled Ores about 1 time out of 3.
I'm a little fuzzy on what exactly Dave Arneson wrote. On p6 it says "A Poem by Dave Arneson", but there is no poem. Instead we get "an abstract of a poem by Dave Arneson"
Does that mean:
A) Dave wrote a poem, and someone (presumably Havard) summarized the story of the poem in prose.
or
B) Dave wrote the whole abstract as it we see it on pages 6-9, and there never was a poem?
I guess B, but in any case it'd be nice to have a bit more info about what it is and about when it was written and how it is that it is used "with permission of the author". There's some pretty interesting things in there and the whole thing reminds me a bit of the write up on Izmer Dave did.