11-30-2014, 06:12 AM
Raphael Pinthus Wrote:Sweet, thanks.
Now, what I meant with "three-line pitches" would be something like this:
"On the western shore of Lake Hope, a lonely fisherman has caught a dying Sar-Aigu princess in his net. Mesmerized by her beauty, he has hidden her in the basement of his home, and nurtured her back to health. His newfound love, or rather, his prisoner, however, longs to return to her home in the deep sea, and, with her restoring magic, turns the fisherman into her demonic pawn..."
Wow, that is well done!
Sadly I don't have this poetic talent. I think I will leave what I wrote as is for now, but I eagerly await more from you and other posters on this!
-Havard
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