ebay Wrote:Adventures in Thonia: Editors' Production Manuscript



…which became D&D module DA1, TSR #9172, by David Arneson & David Ritchie. (No, Mr. Arneson's handwriting does not appear in this manuscript; this was in-house TSR.)



Unique item, obviously as rare as it can possibly get.



Condition: Slightly worn, corner dings & some dog-ears; lots of writing in red ink (editors' original notes). Cover sheets have more dirt than the rest, and bottom-of-the-pile sheets have more wrinkles.



Commentary: First someone had to input the original notes from Dave Arneson into the TSR mainframe computer. I would guess it was the late Dave Ritchie, co-author of the work. (Mr. Arneson was well-known for producing fragmented output containing outstanding ideas; someone else had to do the rigorous work of constructing most of the sentences and paragraphs.) Then the editing began, as shown in this unique manuscript.



Section 1 (about 250+ pages): 1986 photocopies (grayish white) of the original input text. Some are marked "Chronicles of Thonia"; many are marked "The Comeback Inn"; some are "Blackmoor Characters". Almost all are marked "© 1985 David L. Arneson" or "C. D.Arneson".

Note: Routine editing/development probably occurred prior to this output. Few changes are marked on these pages.



Section 2 (about 250+ pages): Original 1986 TSR printer output (the beige of 25-year-old paper), with many editor's notes (by Deborah C. Ritchie) in red ink.



Section 3 (32 pages): photocopies of assorted maps. Includes 28 single-page maps, 2 single-page map text inserts, and 2 double-sheet (11x17) maps.



NOTE: More than 525 pages; weight about 7 pounds plus packaging. Please WAIT for final invoice (which will include special Insurance, given the nature of this item). The estimated cost (flat rate box) within the continental USA, with insurance, is $25.

Dave L Wrote:MAPS? MAPS!

Please, please ... MAPS!!

Did I mention I'd be interesting in seeing the maps?