I have read through the timeline and it looks pretty good. The overall flow spread out over a longer time is more reasonable. And we finally learn that Mordred's last name is Aleford, that was one of my unanswered questions. The fall of Vestfold is a new story, unless I missed it. Rafael, are you writing that one up?

One little detail is incorrect, the "Carrion Incident" took place in Williamsfort, which was subsequently recovered (not in Newgate as you have it in the timeline). Or are you planning to alter that part of Sven's story a bit?